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Ferris Wheel

Fun and memories
emanate with
radiant feelings of
rosy red love.
Intense kisses from your
soft lips

weaken my already
hesitant spirit with
evanescent waves of
ethereal pleasure
lacking any remorse.

A contest entry

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  • CaliOkie silver member
    March 7, 2009

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    It is best to lack remorse . . . I keep telling myself that, anyway. Pesky feeling that.

    This is well deserved gold. Well done.

    Garrison


  • August Starlight gold member
    March 5, 2009

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    This is utterly beautiful and I truly enjoyed reading it. I find no flaws in this at all. Amazing write, and thank you so much for entering my contest.