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Take Me [Now]

I know you have no idea
What you do to me
I can see it in your eyes
Oblivious

That makes me wonder
When you look into my eyes
What is it you see
Do you see what you do to me

Can You tell how I'm feeling
Any ideas about my heart pounding
All my thoughts going crazy
Fantasies

Take me now
Lets drive away
Somewhere quiet
To be alone
Right Now
Here We go
I'm ready
Take me Now

You flash a smile my way
Did you see my heart jump?
Were you aware
That I melted inside
Excitement

My phone buzzes
Its a text from you
"Ready to go?"
You have no idea

Theres only one reply
"Yes"
I would love to tell you

Take me now
Lets drive away
Somewhere quiet
To be alone
Right Now
Here We go
I'm ready
Take me Now

Author notes

Theres this guy, that I shouldn't be falling for, or near, but I just can't help myself.
You ALWAYS want what you can't have, and I'm destined to try.

So, what are your thoughts?!

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  • sgking123
    September 2

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    chemistry

    chemicals surge across to match cues.That is what this is....if ever there was a romantic it was and is you..lol..i am one as well..BTW


  • still.she.waits
    September 1

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    everyone wants what they can't have at one time or another. lol
    this portray the sweet high school love.
    good job