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Namesake.

My father is the most profound thinker I know.
His words are well planned and kind.
Many a subject I have approached him with.

As a child I was curious of death.
His response was, and I quote:
"We all end up feeding the worms, Boo Boo"

As a teenager I was curious about drugs.
His response was, and I quote:
"Everything is ok in moderation"

As all adolescents do, I asked about Sex
His response was, and I quote:
"I just don't want you to get hurt"

He is a man of few words. However,
I have strived to remember everyone
by heart.

He has so many views on the world
and so little he has shared.
I know that nature calls him son.
and bad habits are hard to break.

I know that he loves me more than any
man ever could; and most importantly
I am his Namesake.

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  • Never.Give.Up silver member
    March 12

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    It sounds like you love your dad lots

    A wonderful write and I wish you all the best in the contest.

    Kate