Flying overhead
watching, waiting
ridding land of diseased waste
crying to be heard
over the loud thunder of the earth
plummeting then soaring
high above clouds
dancing intricate moves
all for a beautiful show
While She watches-
the Mother of the Ravens
Author notes
Prompt: Picture
A contest entry
- PIF contest by serenity silvermoon.
488 points, ended March 4, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Interesting?
Comments
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Hi Chrissy - Very Nice
I read a few of your poems - you are hot - nice pic - congrats for the contest trophy - got it right now - keep on keeping on - Joe --------------------------- hugs ----------------------------------------------------- peace
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Very nice write. I like the picture as well...I think they go perfect together
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very good write
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wow
love it great job in the contest winning the trophy amazing write i love the pic thats cool as hell keep it up keep on going stay true stay sic peace out and have a nice day -
Well done and a great title
you chose for this one. Good luck
to you here!
Jeremy0826
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I really like this one, excellent poem. I love the title.
good luck
kat
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