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Morning Moan

  The Cock crowed thrice
  I shot him twice
  right up his feathered backside
  The Alarm bell rang
  loud wireless sang
  Get up, get going trackside

  The bed was  so warm
  nicely moulded to with form
  no shower ,no clothes for me
  Conscience quiet, let peace be
  Oh what the heck, hit the deck
  I need that confounded pay check
 

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  • Witty humour and a touch of irreverance shine through this piece, yet you have failed to acknowledge the poet and poem that you used as inspiration for this, please ammend asap.


  • DesolatELifE
    March 9
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    Heh, that makes me laugh. Well written, well done.