There's so much I want to say,
yet I have no clue where to start.
Life death friends family babies and pain,
all of which are laying on my heart.
Maybe if the tears were done pouring down my face,
my mind would clear and I'd know where to start.
My brain is just so fogged up tonight,
that once the words come they take flight.
If only I could reach out and grab them,
then slam them on the paper all together at once.
Then this poem would be written,
and you would have something better to read.
I think I'll start with how run down I feel,
instead of rambling on about where to start.
Hmm...nah, my baby niece is a much better start,
or how I want a baby but it might be too soon.
As you can see my dilemma here with starting,
I have just so much I want to express right now.
I just can't seem to organize it all,
or get it put down in this notebook.
A contest entry
- for my favorites only---ok now its for everyone by Shelby K.
800 points, ended August 26, 2009, 75 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i got it
Sorry for all those bad deeds, I wish u get what u seek -
This is awesome!!!! Very unique =) I really enjoyed this. Keep it up!!
<3 - Jess
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wow
wow this is a bril poem. its awsome the way yor wrote it. i eel d same as what zigon said!!! -
Oh my.
I simply adored this poem, I can literally feel the Hot emotion and and the Sorrow of it. It pains my heart. Lovely!
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