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Tranquility

Walking in the garden, the flowers

Overwhelm my senses with sweet

Smells of love and sensuality

 

Water fountains trickle down like

Tears coming down with soft

Pain washing itself away

 

Butterflies flutter about in a carefree

Motion in the wind giving way to

The freedom that they exude

 

Cobblestone pathways lead me 

To a serene place allowing me to

Enjoy the moment of peace 

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  • J Macabre
    March 4, 2009

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    About someones ideal place of peace...this is truly pretty.
    I have one of those...i dont write about it though for some reason lol.
    Great job. i love it, i can see everything.