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It's Just NotThe Same.(Triolet)

It's just not the same
How I yearn for the used to be
To you was it just a game
It's just not the same
Do you even remember my name
Will I ever shed my misery
It's just not the same
How I yearn for the used to be.

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  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    March 9
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    "Do you even remember my name..."

    Such poignancy!
    You strongly portray your emotion.


  • OldBear34 silver member
    March 5
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    Great Flow!

    It's a great write and leaves one thinking of your plight!