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Do We Need A Break?

i fuck things up
it's what i do
i am so damn good at it

i hurt the ones i love
always have
probably always will

i hate myself for it
does anybody feel my pain
it shouldn't even matter

text messages to me
reflecting what used to be
the pain i caused before
to another man

i can't do this again

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i don't know what to think, what to do, i'm a screw up; a failure; I'm stupid; an idiot... and you deserve so much better than me...........

Please tell me what you think... And be honest

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  • patchgirl
    March 5

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    Awwww.....
    Sometimes things get worse before they get better.
    Sometimes people act without thinking ahead as well.
    This is a good poem though.
    Your emotions are present.