I tried my hand at a funny poem,
But I don't think it went too good.
Every time I tried to write words,
My brain just didn't know it could.
I know this poem is weird,
I know this poem is cheesy.
I tried my hand at a funny poem,
And it wasn't very easy.
Author notes
You can tell me if you think this poem is stupid-it won't hurt my feelings 
A contest entry
- Rhyme Humor by sorries.
400 points, ended April 23, 2009, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Titles & Topics!!! plus anything goes. by purplemoon.
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Well stupid would be harsh it is silly funny and hilarious. This poem also speaks about how sometimes no matter how hard we try we cant write a decent poem. I like it. Bravo well done.
Thanks for the entry.
Kathryn
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Lol thanks for the vote of confidence, I still think its kind of stupid
But thank you for commenting and reading and the clappys *clap* *clap* *clap*
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this is cute and it's kind of about the way our muse works. If it's there, it's there ... but we can't force it. Nice try and thanks for entering. Just so you know; the green bg is making my keyboard and fingers look green
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lol that's funny...thanks for reading & commenting!
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lol I like it it's a really funny poem!
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Rhyming
Rhyming comes very easily,
I believe it is a gift to me,
It comes in handy at times in my day,
Especially poetry club, by the way.
I don't use a "rhyme thing" or website,
It all comes straight from my mind,
When my brain was being created,
I was given the gift of rhyme. -
xD You showed me this before! I don't think it's stupid, it's hilarious! Fun and amusing. I can tell you for sure, you have a gift with rhyme. I don't care if you use allpoetry's rhyme thing or rhymezone I really don't care, you always use just the right words and just the right rhyme to make me want to keep reading. Nice job
~Kera
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in the first and seventh lines, "i tried my hand" means "i tried to do it"...it flowed the best when I wrote it...
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i dont get it? your hand?
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lol these colors look irish!!! (i'm not irish btw, i'm italian and american and a teeny bit british-canadian)
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