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Thursday morning

I love bright and blue thursday mornings
Clouds are clear and the golden sun sings
The scent of trees, on the winds wing
One of the pleasures that autumn always brings

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  • Juno101
    July 28, 2009
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    the rhyming is nice and for being such a short poem i really enjoyed it. it hink it was creative and also playful. good job.


  • Lencio Rodrigues
    July 15, 2009

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    This is a truly beautiful monorhyme, acknowlegding the wonders of our creator. Well, you could go on and on with this write, but it seems okay to leave it this way too.

    Lencio


  • Indeed
    June 2, 2009

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    i wish that I knew how to shorten it up like that.. All of my poetry, noone wants to stick around for because it's pretty long....hahha! God Bless you and your short poem!


  • condor gold member
    May 16, 2009

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    Yeah, and don't i agree with these wonderful words. I like that line...clouds are clear and the golden sun sings. It tells me that the day was so pleasant and carefree. Well done indeed.