Shredded heart, unrepairable,
loving him, so unbearable.
Tender touches, hidden glances,
fate steps in with second chances.
To fly again, to spread my wings,
you touched my heart, again it sings.
My sadness echoes in the distance,
chased away by your persistence.
Sweetest love you offered me,
as you got down on bended knee.
Smiles, warm feelings inside,
growing passion is not denied.
Your loving heart, my lost soul.
each one a half becoming whole.
Whispered words in dark of night,
reverberate in morning's light.
Bid thee farewell, goodbye sorrow,
I put my faith in tomorrow.
To cuddle close, to hold you near,
to hear you say, I love you dear.
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Fantastic
Another romatic masterpiece, you have done very well here, blessings with love John
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Hugs John
Thank you for always stopping by and being so encouraging in my writing and as a friend. You take care. Loving Blessings coming your way. Always, Sandy
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Excellent Sandy there is no more to be added to this comment I think that one word says it all
Excellent
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Hello my friend
Always a pleasure to have your presence in my comments.
Always brings a smile. I appreciate you reading and your thoughtful comments. Hugs to you.
Take Care,
Sandy
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Bravo.
Now, THAT was old-school. Very bittersweet words expressed. Like something out a Shakespearean play. Good one, Auntie Sandy.
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Good Morning Jaime
I hope all is well with my sweet nephew. Always nice to read my comments and find yours. Hugs to you and I hope the weekend is a great one for you. Take Care, Sandy
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Olde worlde romatic and beautiful. Sheila
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Thank you Shelia. Hugs to this beautiful weekend. Bless You, Sandy
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wow i absolutely love this, it's so well set up, too. the flow is perfect, the rhyme is great and completely not forced at all, and the story is heart touchingly wonderful. fabulous job!
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Thank you for the lovely comment. You take care. Sandy
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A wonderful love story Sandy, well done.
Beautiful
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Thank You Max!!!!!!
So nice to have you drop by. Always brings a smile. You take care. Hugs and Smiles, Sandy
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