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uncertain days find the most faith


dear invisible hand,
thank you for causing miracles
as often as disasters.



i age with a circadian rhythm,
but the mooneyed prophets
lied about death:

i will live forever
in your branches
sheltering redbirds
from the night mists,

and kiss the soil
when it whimpers
with another reaping;

and most of all
i will pray,
life seeping
into ashen valleys

until i feel your fingers
against my soft, tired skin.


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Comments


  • chloris
    March 26

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    this is wonderful but i'd rather have the citation within quotation marks than in italics... thanks so much hun.


  • wynd-fyre
    March 16

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    Wow...I haven't read your stuff in a while, but Now I remember why I added you to my favorites! Great job. Awesome write!


  • writebrain
    March 16

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    "i age with a circadian rhythm"

    beautiful line!
    this flows flawlessly and has such a great overall feel.

    well done!

  • Skyler Gordon
    March 14
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    =D