Sitting with you on this ferris wheel
the sun setting, a parade of colors.
Pink, blue, purple the colors of love
the colors of my adoration towards you.
Our hands entwinned enjoying this moment,
just us two together high in the sky.
Looking down upon the world, fore nothing else matters
at this moment but me and you.
Sitting with you on this ferris wheel,
rotating round and round in continuous circles.
The world is hazy, just an obscured blur
because the only thing I'm thinking about is you.
Sitting with you on this ferris wheel
the sun setting, a parade of colors.
Pink, blue, purple the colors of love
the colors of my adoration towards you.
I look at you and you give me your heart warming smile,
and for the very first time I speak to you those three small words
I love you.............
Author notes
This poem is written for a contest based on this beautiful picture. let me know what you think 
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv38/letswatchthiscityburnx3/life.png
A contest entry
- quickie anyone? by August Starlight.
450 points, ended March 5, 2009, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow,
this made me smile. very widely.
i've always loved poems and stories like this.
very touching, good luck.
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Aw =] It's really sweet, very romantic. Made me smile.
I love the lines:
'The world is hazy, just an obscured blur
because the only thing I'm thinking about is you.'
It's pretty... heartwarming... makes me want this lol.
Love the repetition of your first verse too.
Well done =D
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