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Shadow

I fear to speak
and announce my insecurities.
I yearn to bring to light
the thought that plagues.

The mind can not shake it,
my will can not break it.
This lingering thought nags at me
keeping me captive to doubt.

My happy time
has been over shadowed
by this haunting dream
with painful images.

My heart grows heavy
and tears burden my eyes.
I can only keep faith
and believe it only a dream
that, perhaps, love brought to imagination.

Author notes

Just something that has been bugging me. Can't seem to shake it. Needed to get it out.

My poetry never follows the dictated pattern. So don't yell at me for it.

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  • apoeticinjustice gold member
    March 4, 2009

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    this leaves the reader wondering what "that" thought might be...an interesting read...small edit: painfull >> painful.
    Well done.
    Rory