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Out of the Dark

Get out of the dark
you racists, homophobes, and adulterers.
We are all equal.
We all walk the same,
and feel the same emotions.
You are no different from the rest.

Get out of the dark
you murderers, suicidals, and hunters.
We all feel pain.
We all want revenge.
It sucks.
You are no different from the rest.

Get out of the dark
you burglars, robbers, and thieves. 
We all want what we can't have.
We all get jealous.
No one has it all.
You are no different from the rest.

Get out of the dark
and be enlightened.
Your aches and pains,
they aren't new.
Darkness is only
the absence of light.

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  • penman gold member
    March 10
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and so well done. Thank you for sharing