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Real

Am I real.
Am I here in my sorrow of ocean.

I cry my tears for I am lost in the depths of depression.
Love's  lost I feel as I drown in my despair.

No one to love me only hate.
I am different and they don't undrstand.

Am I real am I here.
Can you love me.
Can warm my coldness.

Can you stop my numbness.

I wait in my deep slumber.
For the one to waken my from my depression and bring me
to the surface.

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To the artist who made the picture very good job. I like the color of it.

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  • Kuranya gold member
    March 15, 2009

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    This is such a sad piece almost like you've lost yourself. I felt the emotion. Best to you in the contest