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Rubik's Cube

 

 

I wanted to paint every single difference

into a million forms of same

and let the chatter

of clattering parings

slide to a  stop.

 

I am sick

of the never-ending game,

matching.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • raw love
    March 7
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    very nice, I like your style. You have a way with words.


  • worshipchick
    March 5

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    Wow, awesome write and well deserved win. You expressed so much in a few simple words. I love the rhythm of the piece as well as what it represents. Blessings! :-)


  • digitalnudity
    March 4
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    well said...


  • Kari gold member
    March 4
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    I so agree.


  • luna-midnight gold member
    March 4

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    hehe. this is so cool i like the chatter of clatterings, thats wicked! thanks for entering, and good luck
    Stephanie ♥

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