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Up Is Down

Seems in this economy
We're all trying to climb a ladder
That only leads down into the sewer

Me
All I'm trying to do
Is hold the darn thing in place
But that gets hard to do when it keeps moving

It's confusing
We're turning our heads searching for hope
But there's none to be found
Face it
We're all human
Prideful, arrogant, ignorant
Human

Try to help one
Three fall
I'm figuring it all out
Help no one
And no one extra is hurt
Though no one extra gets better

Total strangers dip their toes
In the nasty water of this town
Their feet slipping on a ladder
That instead of going up, goes down

Seems to me
We're finished here

Author notes

is there any hope left?

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  • AsheAngel
    March 6

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    Wow sis this is so true It seems like We are in a never ending whirlpool that can only lead to our destruction Lovely write sis