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No Such Thing

There's not such a thing
as true, honest hate.
It's fake!
Misunderstanding;
in a different form.
It's fear.
It's fear of what we
will not chance to see.
Open your
eyes! It's beautiful.
Open up to some-
thing new.

"Hate" can be broken
when the ignorance involved
ceases to exist.

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  • Nickelspring gold member
    March 9

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    I like the way this one flows and pauses and flows some more- calls attention to your point.
    Nicely done!
    KW~

  • I believe you've done such a terrific job explaining this. I took it in a different way than you meant it I think, but I still agree with a hundred percent. Great write!


  • Rushkins
    March 4

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    Agreed

    I love this idea and i wish it would spread like the virus of "hate" has for year upon years, some how it seems harder for people to love instead of judge, this poem gives me hope

  • lovely-bones
    March 4

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    That was good. It had a lot of emotion in it. And I agree with the poem completely. The only awkward park for me is "It's fear of what we
    will not chance to see." But otherwise, I thought it was really good.