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That somebody that in a million to one chances will come along

He is my lover
He is my somebody when I feel like a nobody
My best friend
My shoulder to cry on
That person with me thru the good times and the bad.
Somebody that I can open up too and cuddle with.
You are the healing in need for this mangled and broken heart.
I hope you know how much I love you
He is my lover
He is my somebody when I feel like a nobody
My best friend
My shoulder to cry on
My...



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  • Emoforever
    June 2
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    i really like it lol.


  • XxblackholesunXx
    April 13
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    this is very beautiful

    wow i love the way you wrote this your a very talented writter


  • Emo-goth16
    April 8
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    this i can really relate to i have someone like that


  • MasterFoxFang
    April 7
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    Wow

    wow wulfy amazing i like this alot keep this up you have some great talent


  • emo dude
    March 18
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    awwwwww, this is such a cute poem, I LOVE IT!!!

  • emo dude
    March 17
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    i love this poem its realy good


  • xxemogaaraxx
    March 5

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    ........... AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thanx blue, You'll be thanked personally

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