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Darkness

I don't know
How to get out
Of the abyss
I've seemed to
Drop myself in
Because I let
My negative emotions
Take ahold of me
And not let go

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I just summed up feelings that we all have at one point or another.

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  • Jp-WOW-
    March 4

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    ohhh a sad one true that we all get that way one time or another. However it's soo important to remember what's really important and why you keep sloggin though hey? However from an eng. lit perspective there's too many sylables of "my negative emotions" however since "take ahold of me" has more than the normal it kinda works, it just breaks it up a bit for me. Your short and sweet style is just amazing though, i'm really envious! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx