I get lost through your words
They travel as DARK as mine
I've never seen you in person
Although I tend to see your face
A broken heArt I got
At least it's healing
I hate being the last to know
He's not in lOve with me anymore
Maybe I'm just a shaDow of a girl
A ghost upon the world that crys
Here I sit in deary midnight
myStified by your sighs
You know what the tHought that draWs me says
That even though I can't see your face
Or feel your arms around me
The thought of wanting you reSides
Author notes
Yay...for theDARK1's contest. I love playing with rules.
Written February 25th, 2004
A contest entry
- DARK shadows by theDARK1.
318 points, ended March 23, 2004, 28 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR SILVER TROPHY
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wow i really like this poem.. itz beautiful... great job i look forward to reading more of ur poetry.. keep writing....
~amandy~ -
Wonderful poem you have written for DARK'S contest.
Good luck~angelica~
Have a magical day -
Wow. This owned me. Great job, and good luck. I really enjoyed this.
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great job...good luck in the contest...peace be with you always..
~~DI~~ -
No, this isn't about Jon. You know I only care for Jon as a friend. This is partly my imagination, and partly my feelings of liking Jesy, but not getting to see him.
You know I will always be here for you. I don't know what I feel for you. A lot is going on, and you will have to talk to me face to face about it. Otherwise, I can't tell what I feel.
Nothing is wrong with being sensitive to the world. It just means you're not as cold-hearted as the rest of the hypocrites that share the air we breathe. You're awesome the way you are.
Tasha -
loved it
aww so full of emotion i cant say anything i loved. it is it john? if not thats cool thanx for the applose on my poems and i will be applosing three of yours stating with this on thank you for being there for me all the times i have needed you. you realy have helped me so has the rest of the group. i never knew how to tell you but the poem named my last thoght was about you but it is ok if you dont share the same feelings can you tell me how to stop being so sensitive to the world -
you're more than welcome!
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Hehe..thanks. I have a short attention span so all my poems are written within 5-10 mintues and I never edit them. Thanks for a great contest. I will have to enter more when you start up some more ones!
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i was truly impressed with such a quick entry in the contest already. every rule followed to boot. i was about to get out of here for awhile, but i had to check out your entry. i think you did a 'shadowy' job (which means very fine in english, hehehe). thank you for taking the time to enter and follow the rules...i am guessing that you do know what you spelled, but then itz obvious just with the title of the contest, hehehe.
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