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Betrayal

You waited in
The shadows
And then attacked
Stabbing me in
The back
And walking away
With my pain
Being your
Satisfaction

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I have no idea where I got the idea for this, but I like it

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  • Jp-WOW-
    March 4
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    WOW!!!!

    COR!
    Dark, mysterious, you... are an AMAZING poet! Show your mum some of these because i'm really impressed! With some fine tuning and a few more years pratice you could actully be writing collections you know! These are bloody brilliant! I wish mine were this good!!!