You and I
are the salt of this earth ~
God may be the chef,
but we have the choice
of how we enhance the flavor.
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Salty
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A contest entry
- QUICKIE (PIF) by In Too Deep1.
975 points, ended March 4, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Hope you use the flavouriing to make a dish fit to last your whole life.
Congrats on your silver trophy.
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congradulations on the silver
well done

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a wonderful write I love this congratulations on your shiny
maralisa


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Beautiful take on the prompt. Often it is hard to decipher which is salt, and which is sand. One disolves on the tongue and the other erodes the integrity. A most enjoyable read, and thanks for entering






