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to Julez

YOU LOVED US WITHOUT JUDGEMENT,
HELD US WHEN WE NEEDED IT MOST!
WAS THERE THROUGH THICK AND THEN,
BROUGHT US UP FROM OUR LOWEST POINTS!

SAVED US WHEN WE NEEDED SAVING,
WISH WE COULD'VE DONE THE SAME!
WAS A MOTHER, DAUGHTER, AND FRIEND,
ALWAYS THERE UNTIL THE VERY END!

LOSING YOU WAS LIKE LOSING A HEART,
JUST SOMETHING YOU CAN'T LIVE WITHOUT!
THROUGH TEARS AND PAIN IN OUR EYES WE SAID GOODBYE,
TILL ONE DAY WE SEE YOU SMILING AGAIN!

WE CLOSE OUR EYES AND SEE YOU SITTING BY A RIVER,
AN OAK TREE AND SUNSET FADING IN THE BACKGROUND!
GUITAR IN HAND YOU WAVE ONE LAST GOODBYE,
SLOWLY YOU FADE AS THE LIGHT DISAPPEARS!

YOUR VOICE SLOWLY RINGS OUT,
SO SOFT TO OUR VERY EARS!
DON'T CRY ONE DAY I'LL SEE YOU,
TILL THEN I LOVE AND MISS YOU ALL!

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  • Antebellum
    March 26
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    sad. but very well written. great job.

  • OMG! *cry*

    Oh bubby she would so love this! i have been wanting to right something about her and i think this as helped me come up with an idea! this was amazing! I am speechless! keep writein bub!