Your emerald eyes
See through to my soul
Like a looking glass
Looks to the sea
Author notes
Emerald green is one of my favorite colors so inspired this short but heartfelt write.
In a list
A contest entry
- About Something Green by Kiddy.
600 points, ended April 9, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I like the haiki poetry
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Powerful e enough to impress me. Nicely done. All the best!!!
Kiddy's score - 46
Dr.Veer's score - 44
Total - 90
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Yep, you must be my Mom! I must be one of those 1 in 12 kids everday that are given to the wrong parents because I love Emerald green too! If I aint one of those kids, then I wish I was.. Spent my whole day daydreaming I was
Great way to forget about everything else. Anyways, bout your awesome short poem:
Awesome poem for only three short lines! Totally says alot! I love how you chose a looking glass and the sea to describe what you mean. Must be because your a pirate (your "motto", your icon, and some of your poems lol)
Loved it!
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ah matey, my eyes are a deep grey/blue but i will pretend they are green if ya buy me a barrel or eight
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pick yer poison mate... be it rum er ale.. i'll buy ye a barrell!
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perchance i could have a cup of lily; jaded, the fragrance is divine, as sweet as honey i am thinking. a barrel of that then please
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Short sweet, visual are your words....I adored pieces like this so direct....and poetic imagery come to life......excellent ...novy
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Thank you so much for your kind remarks and for taking the time to read and comment on this short piece. I truly appreciate your kind words.
Lily ♥
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Oceanic beauty of soul ...
perceived by special sight of emerald. Lovely imagery.
Thank you for reading my poem. I appreciate your comment.
Love
Myra
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Thank you so much for such a lovely comment on this short piece. I truly appreciate your taking the time to read and comment on this for me.
Lily ♥
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it is an amazing write, it's short but perfect the way the way that it is, i can picture the emrald eyes as i am reading this, great poem, best of luck in the contest
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Thank you so much for such a wonderful comment on this short piece. I truly appreciate your stopping by to read and comment. Lily ♥
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i like it
I love the poem but my eyes are blue hun... Sorry had too. I really loved the poem it was sweet and very to the point
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thanks for the great comment Lactar, even with the smartass comment about your blue eyes I'm glad you liked it and found it to the point.
's Lily
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The bring an emerald ocean appearing like that not seen before, and all in three lines, exceptional.
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Ummmm ok. thanks. there are 4 lines and the main focus was on the emerald eyes first then tied in with the ocean but thank you for your comment and for taking the time to read. Lily ♥
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sweet.
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thank you
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VERY TOUCHING!!!!
Yes, that shade is beautiful! One of my most striking eyes are of a lady who played a music teacher on the movie BRIDGE TO TERRIBITHIA, her eyes are a color of blue and gray mixed. Almost an aqua color. ;f's
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thank you for taking the time to read and comment on this short piece. I'm glad you liked it. thanks for the clappies too!
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That is pretty deep.
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Thank you for your comment
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Love it...Love you too
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love you too sweetie!
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really nice poem well done.
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thank you for your nice comment!
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from the depths of the waters
my world does flood
for happinness is you.
this is gorgeous lilly bell
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Thank you my beautiful Onyx for your wonderful comment on this short piece. We were supposed to write about something green in 4-40 lines and this was all that came to me. And you know me....I can write forever. LOL so when it stopped at 4 lines, so did I. Thank you again honey for your loving comment and the clappies... no one gives me the clap quite like you do! LMAO! Lily ♥
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