I still feel you
In everything
I do...
Your ghost
Lingers
Like the lies
You told me
That I was
It that there would
Never be anyone
Else that could
Sustain you
Until you meet
Her...
She stole your heart
You still held
Me at night
But you weren't
Thinking of me
When you were
In my arms....
You were in hers
And when we
Made love
It's her name
You silently said
And now
You hold me
As you tell me
That she's it
And you have to
Go
But we can still be friends
I smile
While my heart slowly
Crumbles like
Dried Bread......
I'm not sure the
Pieces will ever
Truly fit back
Together
But Im moving
On....
Oh and by the way
The little girl
I hold
Looks so much
Like you.....
She's a firm reminder
Of your ghost....
A contest entry
- *Well I Never Thought I'd Say I'm Fine Without You* (Round 1) by she still smiles x.
1800 points, ended April 26, 36 entries
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Comments
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Oh wow -- this gave me chills! Such a twist to the ending -- I wasn't expecting that at all and I LOVED it!
Great use of the title as inspiration. Thanks for entering and best of luck!

