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#7] I Still Hear Your Ghost

I still feel you
In everything
I do...

Your ghost
Lingers
Like the lies

You told me
That I was
It that there would

Never be anyone
Else that could
Sustain you

Until you meet
Her...

She stole your heart
You still held
Me at night

But you weren't
Thinking of me
When you were

In my arms....

You were in hers
And when we
Made love

It's her name
You silently said

And now
You hold me
As you tell me

That she's it
And you have to
Go

But we can still be friends
I smile
While my heart slowly

Crumbles like
Dried Bread......

I'm not sure the
Pieces will ever
Truly fit back

Together

But Im moving
On....
Oh and by the way

The little girl
I hold
Looks so much

Like you.....
She's a firm reminder
Of your ghost....

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  • Oh wow -- this gave me chills! Such a twist to the ending -- I wasn't expecting that at all and I LOVED it! Great use of the title as inspiration.

     

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