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Siamese



Mind’s desire spine
connecting twins
of light and dark
in life’s cotillion,
marrow wed forever,
death not ending
the dance.

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20 words
'For Eternity', Brandan Roberts
http://astomious.deviantart.com/art/For-Eternity-94845000

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  • Meroza
    March 31

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    Wow your words bring the image to life, well done!

    Take care


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    March 5

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    Wonderful. Yes you have caught te picture vividly with your words.
    Best wishes in the contest.
    Gaylene


  • crimsondew
    March 4
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    Quite the picture in words..well written..All the best!


  • maralisa silver member
    March 4
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    a wonderful take onthe image promt good luck in the contestmaralisa