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In the Poetry Aisle, part seven




Days would be flying, Guy realized, as he entered his house and
headed straight for the computer, propping up his calender
prominently.

"It IS still Tuesday, isn't it?" he asked the loading computer screen.

He went directly to Beth's email and typed in a desperate heading,
"Call me...as soon as you can," as he added both his home phone
and cell phone numbers, for it had been so long, it seemed, since
they had been in touch.



Just as he had crawled into bed and started to drift off to sleep
the insistent ring brought him back to his urgency. Beth was
amazed that he was asking HER for advice, since their friendship
had been based on Guy pulling Beth out of her disasters. It was
just like always, even though so much time had elapsed.




She was full of ideas, particularly those dealing with NOT losing
Gwen. The Friday event had so many possibilities that Beth's mind
was flying even faster than Guy could keep up.

"Get up and write this down," shouted Beth. "I know your memory.
Note the times, the places," she continued. "You have great ideas,
Guy. Don't be hesitant to put them into action !"

Wednesday was a whirl, setting up a work schedule that allowed
him to take some vacation days, getting some computer time to
research the plans he wanted to put into action. And then a trip
to the mall to get some prizes to take to the popcorn place that
specialized in custom "Cracker Jack" packaging.

"Gwen? Good you're home already. Do you mind if I stop over for
just a few minutes?" Guy asked while making his way thru the
parking lot back to his car.

Happy for the surprise visit, Gwen continued her organizing, taping
color coded papers to her packing boxes to keep kitchen separate
from bath from bedroom from office.




As she welcomed Guy with a big hug, Gwen breathed in the popcorn
aroma from the white bag Guy was carrying.




"Just hold on," Guy laughed, holding the bag high in the air.
"You wanted me to see the outfit you picked out for Friday."

When she held the white outfit in front of her, Guy had visions of her
wearing it for a different occasion, so he asked her about "a little
black dress" that Beth had suggested. Gwen happily pulled out
a stack of hangers each holding what every woman hopes is the
"perfect" little black dress.





Gwen confessed she would be happy to wear black, not wanting
to stand out too much.

In the kitchen Gwen got her surprise within a surprise when she
opened the custom popcorn. As Guy displayed his Moxie key chain
Gwen kept finding plastic ring after ring in her box, putting them on
all her fingers.

"There's a size for every finger," she laughed, as Guy examined them
and slipped some on and off and interchanged some, concealing one
in his hand.




Admiring all her be-ringed fingers, Gwen excitedly told Guy about
her positive experience at the real estate office, and her subsequent
visit to the bank, along with her noon hour trip home with the agent
for a brief inspection of the house.

"He must have been pleased with the immaculate condition of the
house," Guy commented. "It still looks as if you just moved in to
a brand new home."

"Yes, he was impressed. It seems the wife was so distraught with
all the transfers, not being able to get into her dream home, that she
had begged him to make it possible for them to move in, and not
have to take another temporary apartment," Gwen continued. "So
I arranged for the movers for next Friday, and they already dropped
off all these packing boxes in the garage before I got home. But.."
Her voice trailed off."

"It will all work out, honey," Guy said in a comforting manner. "But
did you arrange to be off Friday, and most of next week? "

Gwen confirmed she had everything taken care of and quizzed him on
his "shopping trip" the next night. No secrets from Guy, just a reminder
to pack a small overnight bag to take along for the big Friday night
reception for Juan Carlos.




They parted with a warm hug and kiss as if they had done this
hundreds of times before. And Gwen thanked him for all the
silly rings, and pressed a folded paper in his hands.

"I wrote this with my mythical dream man in mind.
And now, I believe it is for you," said Gwen smiing.
"Read it when you get home."

Not a patient person, Guy sat in his car in front of Gwen's
house and read with the aid of a penlight.



While the Street Sleeps

Creature of the night,
wide awake in pre-dawn light,
opens the door to a familiar sight;
both drawn together by telepathic might,
the deep need for each other a mutual plight.
The story could continue, reaching a height,
but you the reader, with great insight,
can develop the scenario, can incite
the action, the intimate delight,
the rising climactic flight,
story's end, quite right.




Thursday morning found Guy a motivated man. Gwen's poetic
words, his conversation with Beth and sharing tales of their
respective "lost" loves had firmed his determination
to follow his instincts.

An important trip to the bank, a three hour round trip to
South Portland, a meeting with maintenance at a the new
strip mall he had worked on—and Guy's day merged to
late afternoon.

At the Agency, Gwen was excited about what her web searches
had revealed. Not only had she organized the work schedule and
freed her time for the next week, she had found news releases
that piqued her interests. Gwen always had an eye for new business,
a client in waiting for her! Friday night's event at the Governor's
might just be the start of a new venture.




A trade mission, Maine products and Spanish olive oil appeared on
her screen while ideas formed in Gwen's head. Smiling as she saw
the three silly rings she was wearing dance on her fingers across
the keyboard, Gwen suddenly became aware of the slipping of time.

Thursday early evening, two freshly showered people met in Gwen's
doorway, the day's worries washed away, ready for the adventure
of the night.

"Gwen," Guy said with a slight mischievous turn of his head, "I
haven't been completely honest with you," he disclosed as he
locked the door and escorted Gwen to his car.

Gwen stopped cold on the driveway. "What?"she said, aghast.

"Well, I've been living with someone. But we're dropping her off
at my brother's on our way," Guy explained.

Gwen, in confusion, peered into the car. "There's no one in there?
Is this a joke?"

As Guy opened the car door for Gwen, she saw piercing green
eyes peering from a swirl of blanket on the back seat.



"Honey, meet Ornery, the most miserable cat in the world," Guy
said with a gesture to the rear of the car.

Gwen reached back and brought the extra folded blanket to put
in her lap in the front seat. As Guy got in, she turned to him,
"Well, no wonder she's ornery if you tease her like you just teased
me. My stomach nearly hit the driveway," Gwen chastised him.

"Oh, oh, I was just worried you wouldn't want to share me with a
cat. Oh, and you thought...." Guy burst out laughing, "Oh, I am so
sorry. But I was so concerned because she's such a miserable cat,
but she's mine. I didn't want you to feel bad when she gives
you her usual cold shoulder!"

"Here, honey-cat. Come here to Gwen," she cajoled.

"Don't even try," warned Guy. "She only tolerates me when I
feed her."



Like a stealth black missile, Ornery jumped between the seats
and landed on the blanket on Gwen's lap, putting her head on
Gwen's arm, purring softly as Gwen stroked her fur.

"I can hardly believe it!"Guy remarked. "You might call it a sign!"

The happy scene lasted only minutes until Guy pulled up in his
brother's driveway. "He'll be home in a few minutes," Guy said
as he grabbed Ornery's blanket and bag of canned tuna and cat toys
from the back seat.

But it took Gwen to carry her new friend out of the car and into the
house, to Ornery's favorite chair in her home away from home.

Back in the car, Guy reflected on the instant bonding that had just
taken place.

"Amazing," Guy said, shaking his head.

"Another sign," Gwen asked?

Guy smiled broadly, "Ah, one of many. "

"Any more surprises, like past wives?" Gwen retorted.

"No, no, not me. But you are really all divorced, all legal, got your
papers and all?" Guy questioned, knowing the importance of that.

"Hah!" laughed Gwen. "Don't think I'm crazy, but I keep them in
the side pocket of my purse. I take them out and look at them
whenever I think I may be making a mistake."

Guy winced. "Perhaps you will be able to associate them with
a good decision, not a mistake..."

Gwen looked out the window, commenting, "This isn't the way
to the big mall. Weren't we going shopping?"

"After I talked with Beth last night, she reassured me I'd be quite
all right with what I have to wear. Actually, she reminded me that
was what broke up her wedding plans, twice, with men she had
intended to marry," Guy confided.




"Oh, I get it," said Beth, knowingly. "Big wedding, right? Everyone
wanting his or her own way."

"It was the Mothers, each wanting to plan it her way," agreed Guy.

Beth smiled, "I wanted to tell Gerri to elope. Mom couldn't pay for
that big wedding. But Joe's mother insisted on inviting
their whole huge family. They should have gone to Vegas.
It took them years to pay off the loan for the wedding."

Guy interrupted, " But Vegas weddings aren't such a good deal, either.
Lots of bucks, lots of bucks. Thousands, even for a couple nights.
And who really wants an outdoor event, Red Rock Canyon, helicopters
and limousines? But they do have a license bureau that's open
continually from Friday through Sunday night, and till midnight
the other nights."

Gwen sat silently, wondering about all these specifics Guy knew,
"Actually, it would have been nice for Gerri and Joe just to have
a private wedding, but there would have been so many hurt feelings.
Her mother-in-law would have made life more miserable for her,"

"But it was their wedding. Shouldn't they have it the way they want
it?" questioned Guy."Why take a chance of losing someone you
love by catering to everyone else?"

Gwen chimed in, "I went through it, because I thought that was the
way it should be done, and look how that turned out! Seems it's
easier to lose a dream than to hold on to one."




Gwen's usually fast mind had been slow to connect all the clues,
wedding talk, agreeing on not liking big weddings, the silly rings.
She turned to stare at Guy as he pulled up in front of the new
boutique mall. "Is this the one you worked on?" she asked to say
words, just to say words.

"Right, this is the one. Signs, you were noticing signs.
There are some very artistic ones here," Guy pointed out.

Gwen searched the signs for some hidden meaning, wondering what
Guy was up to. Meanwhile, Guy had flicked the headlights on and off
several times.

At the end of the building a maintenance worker was removing a
large tarp that covered the freestanding sign the mall used to
announce daily specials. Gwen leaned over to Guy's side to see the
sign, as Guy wrapped his arms around her. The worker reached over
to turn on the power to the lighted sign.

Flashing border lights and spotlights lit the sign as Guy said the
words in her ear, "I love you, "lostgirl," will you marry me?




LOSTGIRL
WILL YOU MARRY ME?



His lips overtook hers in a long, long moment, interrupted
by applauding around them by mall customers in the parking lot,
connecting the flashing sign across from the car with the
couple locked in the long, long heated embrace.

"Well, will you?" voices shouted outside the car, before all the
onlookers moved on to their cars, to give the couple privacy.

Guy whispered, " I want you to be "foundgirl," my "foundgirl."
And I'm not wasting time. I don't want to lose you! " he exclaimed.

"I hope you will want to come with me tomorrow morning
and apply for our license.," Guy pleaded. "I know it won't be
issued right away, but  Beth told me the governor might
be able to help with that."

Gwen was at the breathless point where she couldn't utter a
word. Guy reached in his pocket and pulled out a box.

"I wanted to do everything right. All those TV commercials
told me that women like men who go to Jared's. So I went
down to South Plymouth to Jared's," Guy said as he opened
the box and presented it to Gwen.

Finding her voice, Gwen spoke softly, "So that's why I couldn't
find the silly ring that fit my ring finger after you left last night."

"I had to get the right size. Now I hope I matched your taste,"
Guy said as he took the ring out of the box.



There it was, the new workshop he was going to build on the back
of the garage. A full carat in an unusual square setting with
corner accents, brilliant side stones. Romantic, but contemporary,
he thought, just like Gwen.



Gwen put her hand over her heart to calm it, as she took deep breaths.

"Well?" asked Guy?




"Well....." Gwen said, struggling to form words...

To be continued




_________________
M-C



Author notes

An interpretation of Option 22. regarding "lost loves,"
this installment focusing on not letting that happen again.
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4932051 part one
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5005473 part two
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5014152 part three
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5051457 part four
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5067599 part five
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5095869 part six



http://allpoetry.com/poem/5133779 part eight

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  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    March 23

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    excellent~

    Okay
    This is great.....
    I am ready for Part 8 now
    Best of luck in the contest
    Hugs
    Susan~~~


    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      March 23
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      Ah, the answer looms! Will it be yes?
      Thank you for taking time to read
      the adventure!

      M-C


  • catz Moderators member
    March 22

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    This is the first of the story parts I've read so now I'm anxious to read the rest. You did a very interesting job of weaving your wonderful artwork within the story.

    Good luck in the contest

    Dee

    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      March 22
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      Hi, Dee1

      If you get to the point that you read part eight,
      you will find the hint of a tie in with Quest,
      the multi-part story of time travel and the search
      for Roxie (Moxie)!

      Thank you,

      M-C


  • jenelda silver member
    March 20
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    Dear M-C, I'm slowly catching up with my commenting and now I've come to your magnificent chapter in your Poetry aisle story and I must say I enjoyed it very much, I will definitely be back to read and comment on the other parts.
    Good luck in the voting.

    Jen


  • angelica silver member
    March 20

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    Having read part one-eight I know what happens but will not tell anyone, they'll have to read the other fantastic parts. I enjoyed them then just as I enjoy them now.


    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      March 20
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      No spoiler alert here! Catching up, I see!

      Nice to see you, Joan!

      M-C


  • Hinemoa silver member
    March 13

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    Dear M-C, I haven't read the other parts so as soon as I can I'll start reading. From what you've written here it looks like it will be a pleasure to read.
    Hine


    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      March 17
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      The adventure wants to continue,
      so the parts continue to grow.

      Thanks for the visit, Hine!

      M-C


  • Mari Goes gold member
    March 7

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    I think she will say YES! At least I hope she does
    The guy is finally committed to the real thing, Gwen better not let the chance goes by
    Lovely episode you have here MC

    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      March 8
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      Thank you. Mari!

      Right, they both need to take a chance
      if "togetherness" is what they want!

      Will get back to the answer in a few days
      after I finish a lot of panting.

      M-C

  • Ayghghgh!!!! The suspense is killing me! Gwen seems to be somewhat perplexed by the suddeness of all of this. Hurry! Hurry! My curiosity is killing me. Write more please.. I love all of your illustrations you have put in here. Please finish I'm dying here! LOL!

    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      March 7
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      Hah! Sorry for your distress!

      Have had to paint a lot of abstract Spring flowers,
      brush to flat clay piece. In a couple days will be back
      to the series!!! It's in my head somewhere!

      It does take me a night to put one together, sometimes
      another night depending oh how many drawings to make,
      the time for scanning and playing with them after the
      scanning.

      Thanks for staying with it, T !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      M-C

    • I think I agree with Hugh..something is amiss here with her reaction to all of what is happening. I guess I'll have to wait and see.....to be continued...


      • Aesthete2000 gold member
        March 7
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        Perhaps she has been overly cautious
        and now is willing to take the plunge,
        with some hesitancy!!!


  • hugh wyles silver member
    March 5

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    Dear Aesthete M-C, aka Cleopatra,

    I just finished reading part seven
    and it's almost now nine o'clock.
    If marriages are made in Heaven,
    I think poor Guy's in for a shock.

    It isn't the ring that will bust him
    or even the pushy in-laws
    but I feel that Gwen soon may entrust him
    with her news of contested divorce.

    The paper she keeps in her purse
    may not be what she claims it to be
    and her ex may soon make things much worse
    to prevent further matrimony.

    These are just some ideas in my head
    but I'm perfectly willing to wait
    for tomorrow I'll get out of bed
    and look for your episode eight.

    ~~~

    But why are all the signs 'moved or deleted' on my screen?
    Is this another evil attempt by Kevin to anonymize things?

    Applause, love and hugs, XXX M-A.

    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      March 6
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      First, the removed----
      This is entered under the" lost love" option
      in the Yem hosted Huguenauty contest, of which
      you are also listed as a judge. Since Feb. 1st,
      I do believe, judges have the graphics deleted
      from their view. and see only the boxes.
      Oh, you must see my lighted sign!
      The solution: sign out and come in as a visitor,
      or sign in as another identity, not judge Hugh.
      Then they will display!!!

      Pitfalls galore you suggest,
      as gloomy as Yem on predictions
      of marital bliss! I shall take the suggestions
      under advisement while I attempt to foist
      happiness upon them!

      Thank you, again, dear Hugh!

      M-C2--Cleo

  • angelica silver member
    March 5
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    LOVE IT!

    Dear M-C, I've read down to the poem Gwen gave him, it's very beautiful. When you meet your soul mate thoughts can be transmitted between both of them, it's an amazing feeling.
    And he's following his instincts.
    Ahhhh, I'm glad ornery came to Gwen, cats can be like that, we have two, Shani will go to anyone but beware if you tease her, she'll strike back and Wendy stands back from people she doesn't know and they both adore Bob, if I want to find Bob, just look for the cats. (sorry, got sidetracked)
    The signs are all there for Guy to follow so long as he keeps looking for them.
    Very true, Mothers can go overboard when their daughter is getting married, they get carried away. LOL
    Awwww now I'm down to the flashing signs, how wonderful, what a lovely way to propose.
    Ohhh will she say Yes and what about their careers, new clients waiting for her and Guy's workshop hmmmm,? I see by Yems comment he's hoping she'll say no haha. M-C The story gets more intriguing as it goes along and I know from our conversations how many hours it takes you to produce the story and the graphics. Well done.
    Will look forward to part eight
    Love Joan

    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      March 5
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      Loving all your insights
      and the "side story."

      Ah, that Yem, fighting for
      Guy's bachelorhood!
      Smart talking by him,
      but, secretly. I bet,
      rooting for Guy!!!!

      Yes, the story has its own will,
      not wanting to see an end!

      Thank you, Joan.

      Love and hugs to you,

      M-C


  • Yemassee gold member
    March 4
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    "Please say no, please say no, please say no." Guy so deserves that workshop. He can get a girl anytime but a good workshop is hard to come by!

    There is an "it" where a "if" should be somewhere in the middle of the story but I can't remember where it was.

    I hopefully Gwen will turn Guy right around and make him bring the ring back and get some cheap one at Wal Mart.

    And that cat...no, it wouldn't happen. Gwen would look like ribbon after "Midnight" got a hold of her! lol It isn't just miserable, it's psychotic. But like it, it can be appeased with food.

    I think there should be a phone call right about now, before she can answer. There is this woman on the other end, and what she says shocks Guy....

    Marriage huh, I just hope Guy knows what he's doing, opening that little box and letting love run amok. Ah if only I were immune.

    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      March 5
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      Oh, you are fighting so hard
      to have Guy resist Gwen,
      but Midnight's counterpart
      sniffed that captivating catnip
      in Gwen's cologne,
      and there goes the story!
      The opening of the box,
      love freed from the locks!

      A phone call! Another interruption!
      This will surely run to ten!!!

      M-C

      • Yemassee gold member
        March 5

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        Yeah, Guy will get caught, he'll be trapped. When you are done, I'll write the sequel that will take place five years later. Poor Guy, dumped for a younger, wealthier, more out-going guy. Poor, poor me, I mean, Guy.

        • Aesthete2000 gold member
          March 5
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          Hey, this couple will be blessed,
          no matter your sequel predictions.
          Psychic Pisces sees happiness in
          the crystal ball and you are not
          talking me out of that vision!!!

          M-C

  • hugh wyles silver member
    March 4
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    Dear M-C (Mlle.-Cleo)

    Because my early morning 'free' time on PC is limited, I keep skipping to comment on the shorter entries first but had promised myself to read parts 6 & 7 of the "Poetry Aisle" first thing today.
    However, after nearly an hour wasted downloading some long emails, then bathing, dressing and getting our breakfasts, visitors arrived and before I even had a chance to get to your latest, it was lunchtime and I had to take Edna to physiotherapy by 1pm.
    We are now home and she has retired to bed, worn out and feeling unwell so I have an hour before I have to take her to
    our GP for a 4pm appointment. I shall savour the enjoyment of reading your latest episodes until I am under less constraint.
    Please understand and forgive? I shall return.
    Love and hugs, XXX Hugh.


  • Denerica
    March 4

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    Wow, again I just love this story...should be a book soon with this...um, I am suspecting she has a career choice to make or a man? Anyway, I knew you would end it this way...no answer yet regardless, nice drawings and the cat is an added plus! Just so done brilliantly. Blessings my dear friend.

    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      March 5
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      Of course, re the ending, suspense always wins.
      No hope of ending with seven,
      so time to think it over for Gwen.

      Thank you, Denise,

      M-C


  • MargaretG
    March 4

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    Wow! A lot happened here! I was rapt through the whole first reading. I like the trick with all the rings; how did Guy get so crafty?
    A couple of typos - early on look for Berth, who turned into Beth. Also the black kitty, could that be a stealth missile?
    This is another fine chapter. Great fun!

    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      March 4
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      Guy was always crafty, but he never realized it before!!!

      Oh, thank you, I was still adding and fixing---and went right
      past those a dozen times!

      Guy is on a roll, making things happen!!!!!

      Thank you, Margaret.

      M-C


  • pixiestix gold member
    March 4

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    Each one better than the last! Aside from your way with words, I loved the blinking graphic "Will you marry me?"

    It is so apparent Aes, how much time and effort you devote to all your artistic endeavors but this lovely tale of finding lost love is definitely in "my top".

    Another fabulous installment!

    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      March 4

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      Thank you, faithful reader!

      I've still been "fixing" and checking for errant letters!

      Wanted so much to finish the graphics and post last night,
      burt I had been up early, and was so tired! But photobucket
      made my decison, for at one o'clock the site shut down for
      maintenance!

      The sign! The sign! I never thought I'd have a need for
      "sparkling text" but it does give the effect of a flashing sign!!

      I have lots of painting on the way, so I thought I'd better
      hurry up and let this one see the light of night!

      Thanks, pix, for the careful read and the kin d words!

      Aes

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