On torrent's blow of swirling weave,
Air currents spinning zephyr breeze.
A winding warp of nature's breath,
Pulsating east,north,south and west.
All earth baptized in Adam's ale.
Rain spills out felled entrails.
Deluge pounds down in vengeance.
Saturation showers it's true intentions.
Colliding currents combust in flames,
Sends volts white hot of searing rage.
Bolting embers scorch dry tinder,
pyre death to ashen cinders.
Terra firma soul laid to waste,
Soil gourged in ruin's trace.
Earthen threads of humus loam,
Drenched in moist primal gloam.
A contest entry
- Kiss The Rain by Sokarjo.
575 points, ended April 5, 49 entries
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Comments
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Your imagery and use of words is spectacular. I like the first stanza best. Thanks so much for your entry.
S -
it's perfect! all of the stuff of the earth and the universe!
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WOW, This is imagery in motion, Nature's Spirits alive indeed, perfect title association for the raging winds, rains and lightning pelting the earth in fury. Very well done. I love storms, they bring an excitment to the air
Thank you for joining me on the path of illumination, best wishes!
And congrats on your 4 years as well!
many blessings, Sandi
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