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In Defense Of Boxes

I need my box where I live,
makes world so prefect,
insanity is chasing the wind.

There is genius in hiding
when calling it freedom,
shuts out singing voices.

Sometimes I do take a peek,
if I know no one is looking,
not crazy enough
to test truth
with witnesses.

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  • Meroza
    March 31

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    Ooooh, I like this one! Its so full of oddness

    Take care


  • maralisa silver member
    March 4
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    a fantastic poem good luck in the contestmaralisa


  • Confusedboy
    March 4

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    Boxes, boxes, many do find peace and protection there. My youngest son, was always hiding in boxes, something that made him want to get inside and hide. lol. He was content, so I stop worrying about those boxes. Thanks for the memories.


  • Denerica
    March 4
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    Brilliant once again dear friend. Blessings.


  • StarEyes
    March 4

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    Bubs,

    What a read this one is! WOW! I love it! Reminded me I need to get back to work on one of my books I left off with a dream about boxes Great job!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta

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