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Solitary

Lost and alone
what do I intend to
become?
I am a solitary
being
one who prefers to bleed

Im sorry if this isnt very good...Please be nice...=)

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  • momwitzman
    March 6
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    I feel it needs more.


    • Walls-within
      March 8
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      hehe. I sort of get this feeling too...I dont know. It is staying the way it is for now though, lol.


  • Guerrero
    March 5
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    .. so many questions are lyingunderneath this. it makes one think.. good job


  • SoundsOfSilence
    March 4

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    I think it could be longer, but it is powerful as short as it is now.

    "What do I intend to become?" What a powerful question. If I had the all powerful godly answer and or knowledge to answer that question, I would entirely. I wish I could help you a little more, I really do. Message me if you want to talk, alright?

    ~~Kitten

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