Shes that kind of girl I envy
Beautiful in every way
only innocent on the outside
with the perfect words to say...
(Shes Perfect)
Shes that kind of girl who knows me
and all that makes me laugh
she understands what makes me tick
and can also understand rediculously hard math...
(Shes Intelligent)
Shes that kind of girl I run to
when everything seems to be falling apart
and then she puts it all back together
and promises I`ll always have her heart
(Shes Wonderful)
Shes that kind of girl who kills me
with the way she cant conform
who is scared of what im scared of
and shes scared of thunderstorms...
(Shes Brilliant)
Shes that kind of girl who hates the rain
and grey clouds in the sky
Shes the kind of girl that will always love me
until the day that we both die.
Please tell me what you think
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This made me smile. It reminds me a little of the fabulous Bob Dylan song 'She belongs to me'. That same rambling brush, picking out the pertinent details, giving us dots to join. I hope you find her and she finds you
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Wow that amazing. I LOVE the way you write. And I like how you wrote (she's wonderful) and (she's intelligent) just to kinda highlight even more what you meant. And awesome write.
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a smiling piece here, ah love, it dances us into those crazy magical shapes and twists our hearts into sighs.
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Beautiful work! wow, Just stunning. I love the writing, the happiness, the 'freshness' an amazing write! I am sure the person you wrote it for will absolutely adore it!
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This is beautifully written!! I loved it this is like me and my best friend!!!! Just one question who was it about to you?
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A very nice sentiment
I liked the notion of the headings in parenthesis, and the only parts that bugged me a little were the contrast in colors (my monitor is weird...made it difficult to read). I'd work on the longer lines that break rhythm...long is okay, but misstepping in reading rhythm breaks thought from rolling like water, and can detract from sentiment (especially for simple minds like mine). All in all it was a very nice sentiment to read.
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Wonderful. Love is so beautiful. Nice job.
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Aww honey this is sweet, and I am sure she will like it.
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