Im not going to heaven
All I deserve is hell
I'm worthless and
tactless
but I dont care.
So what if I burn?
It has to be better than this
Is being dead better than
Emptiness??
I am a lost Soul
dont you see?
so why in hell do you
try to save me??!?
I'm not worth saving
i'm already fading
please dont try to
save me...
Author notes
Well. I dont think I deserve the glory people call Heaven. But maybe I am wrong...What do you think?
Im sorry if this isnt very good...Please be nice...=)
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I see your struggle here. I do think you are worth saving.
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Well of course you think that I am worth saving donna! of course you do. And I just hope that I was able to convey my thouhts as well as I had wished. Thank you for reading.
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You deserve a lot sweetheart...You honestly do. You just need to see that. I love the flow, and the questions throughout the write, they are good. Very good questions.
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Thank you for your comments...Thank you so much.
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I liked it, maybe in the second to last line if you did,
Please don't..
try to save me.
That might work better, that was the only think I noticed that didn't really , 'flow' I liked it though. Yeah, I kind of think the same thing.
And if I did got to Heaven, but I knew other people kind of like me were 'burning' in Hell, I wouldn't want to be there.
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