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Please Dont Cry Tonight

I know he's hurt you
in so many ways
I know he's beat you down
I know that you
love him
I know that you
want help for
him
But please dont cry
Tonight.
Dont let the hurt show
dont let the pain
bleed through.
I love you
and that is more than I can say
for him.
And I dont want to see you cry
yet he makes you cry
please dont fall
dont you stumble
stand strong,
and please dont cry
Tonight.

Author notes

This is written for the most amazing person in the world. My aunt. She tries so hard to make others happy, she often forgets about her own happiness (reminds me of someone...) and she can hold herself together only until she cant take it, and then she breaks down and cries. And I know she is hurting, and I can feel her hurt. Even right now, it makes me so sad to think of her crying alone...I love you Donna. Thank you for being the light in my life, but please dont cry tonight.

I wrote this awhile ago, but I am posting it now. As of now she is...in a calm...a peace...but it is an unnerving peace...but I have faith in her. Even if that is the only thing that I have faith in...

Im sorry if this isnt very good...Please be nice...=)

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  • momwitzman
    March 6

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    This is Awesome!

    This truly brought tears to my eyes! I almost cried. You words are so kind. I am so glad you are my niece. I am glad I can be your light.

  • "And I dont want to see you cry
    yet he makes you cry
    please dont fall
    dont you stumble
    stand strong,
    and please dont cry
    Tonigh(t)."

    This is the sweetest thing I have read in a long time. This is great, not even joking. I am glad you have someone like your Aunt to be there for you. That is very important.

    Tonight needs a 't' at the end, on the last line, just pointing that out so you can fix it.

    Best thing I have read today.
    =D

    ~~Kitten


    • Walls-within
      March 5
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      Why thank you. I am glad that you enjoyed this. And it is so very true...