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Picnic in the countryside

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The road through the forest has buds burstin' new
the song of the thrush serenadin' we two
the endless expanse of the fields full of flower
there we can rest and delight by the hour

But that would be robbin' the heart of the prize
that comes with a bike ride beneath summer skies,
through wanderin' woodlands, where life is inspired
and such bold imaginin's wait to be fired

So let's pack  a picnic in wicker and linen
run far to the country side and the beginnin'
of reams of new poems all awaitin' to spring
where jubilant hearts will be burstin' to sing

where romantic tales shall be comin' to life.
away from the mundane and everyday strife
off to the country side, off let us go there
and an afternoon waitin' for lovers to share

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  • Violinstrings silver member
    March 24

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    wonderfully described story and still keep the same topic flowing and great rhyming without loosing your ideas I like romantic tales come to life
    such a lovely way to decribe love int the summer


  • mysticstorm gold member
    March 17

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    Such beautiful imagery...soft flow and a wonderful story to be told...such a picture you have painted of nature and romance...well done.

    Thank you for sharing!
    mystic


  • Gwenevere
    March 5

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    Whoop!!!! Whoop!!!!! I love picnics.Some fried chicken and chilled wine MMMMmmm!!!! Just what I need, Ros

  • Oooooooooooo this is just beautiful and I love it You know how much I love your stories and rhyme.
    Thank you so much for this beauty.
    Gaylene


  • BluesMan gold member
    March 4
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    Romance, Nature, Imagery, with excelent rhyme and flow. This poem left me light hearted and smiling.

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