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Certainty

match struck
love stuck--
God am I a fool?

heart aches
brave face:
falling can be cruel.

what eyes!
what lies
has my heart believed?

star bound,
hope found
beyond what I'd conceived.

but somewhere,
heart bare,
the aching doesn't cease:

it quiet waits
anticpates
the moment of release--

I need a different sort of peace.

There is a question none can answer and its the question of
how can one be certain ever of another's love?

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