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Lost In Your Arms

i breathe, therefore i live, i feel therefore i am...
[everything] and [anything]
that isnt [real]
i see therefore i [believe]
i trust [nothing]
i am everthing [but...] here

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  • Leela
    March 11

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    i like this very much. whether it is about you or not, i must say i can really relate to this sometimes. nice job.