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A Lover's Quartet


Hand in hand.
We may undertake the sky
and in the evanescence of our life
we will dwell among the stars.

Together.
We shall dance through the ocean
waves, within the phosphorescence
of the twilight of our eyes.

Bouncing feet.
Through the jungle of this ethereal
existence, and in the aurora of our youth
we may be utterly free.

Grasp my heart,
Reach for the quintessence of
this buoyant paramour. A tragedy is
assured, when lovers are errant.


Author notes

In inspiration of the animal song by savage garden....
and a lover's errant.

Maybe AP sister? This is the last poem I wrote and it describes my situation pretty clearly.

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  • tears.of.silence gold member
    March 10, 2009

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    This is really good. I liked this alot. You really used some unique words that I haven't seen in a poem in a long time. I'd love to have you as my sister. Welcome to my family and thank you for entering the contest. Kahy


    • Mila7
      March 10, 2009
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      Great!! Thanks!
      Your the first Member of my AP family.
      Mila


  • Wandering Woodchuck gold member
    March 4, 2009

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    Nice job. I liked this one. The words that you chose gave the poem a very magical feeling.

    Very well done.

    MIke

    • Mila7
      March 4, 2009
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      Thank you very much Mike!

      I was really feeling this one.