Hand in hand.
We may undertake the sky
and in the evanescence of our life
we will dwell among the stars.
Together.
We shall dance through the ocean
waves, within the phosphorescence
of the twilight of our eyes.
Bouncing feet.
Through the jungle of this ethereal
existence, and in the aurora of our youth
we may be utterly free.
Grasp my heart,
Reach for the quintessence of
this buoyant paramour. A tragedy is
assured, when lovers are errant.
Author notes
In inspiration of the animal song by savage garden....
and a lover's errant.
Maybe AP sister? This is the last poem I wrote and it describes my situation pretty clearly.
A contest entry
- Look Here ! by tears.of.silence.
400 points, ended March 14, 2009, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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This is really good. I liked this alot. You really used some unique words that I haven't seen in a poem in a long time. I'd love to have you as my sister. Welcome to my family and thank you for entering the contest. Kahy
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Great!! Thanks!
Your the first Member of my AP family.
Mila
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Nice job. I liked this one. The words that you chose gave the poem a very magical feeling.
Very well done.
MIke


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Thank you very much Mike!
I was really feeling this one.
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