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Four Furless Frogs

four furless frogs
donned their furless clogs
danced all day
then danced all night
on a furless hollow log

the awful "clomp"
the terrible "bomp"
the unnerving "clackety whomp"
so disturbed
the denizens of the swamp
that they rallied against the frogs

"undon those clogs you worthless frogs"
asserted the slithery snake
he flashed his eyes
he slapped his thighs
and leered at the frolicky four

"get jobs, you slobs, get jobs right now"
added the addled gator
he showed his teeth
he laughed, he cried
and glared at the dastardly dancers

"dance not, you lot, dance not, sit still"
scolded the skulky skunk
she twitched her nose
she switched her tail
and beamed at the frivolous frogs



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Comments

  • I like this
    though I agree that it needs an ending; the frogs need there say even if it is to just dance in spite.

  • ea silver member
    March 7
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    fun!


    • zigdaddy silver member
      March 8
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      Thank you so much. I don't know if this one is done yet. I think I have some more work to do on it.