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Iraq

Listen to what I got to say
The Taliban ain’t here to play
And our troops go to sleep with their nightmares
Of goin into homes an havin to walk upstairs.

They be makin bombs eraday
So they can blow our troops away eraday.
Now why won’t they bring our troops back
Come on just bring our troops back from Iraq.

Listen to what I got to say
The Taliban ain’t here to play
And our troops go to sleep with their nightmares
Of goin into homes an havin to walk upstairs.

Our troops be dyin from them roadside bombin
Mothers, fathers, sisters, and brothers be cryin.
An my brotha won't be home till May
Of 2010 and he ain’t in da pen, no way.

Listen to what I got to say
The Taliban ain’t here to play
And our troops go to sleep with their nightmares
Of goin into homes an havin to walk upstairs.

He’s over in Iraq, man that’s jus whack
He got a gun off the military rack
There be troops dyin eraday an that’s a fact
He might be better off with a gat.

Listen to what I got to say
The Taliban ain’t here to play
And our troops go to sleep with their nightmares
Of goin into homes an havin to walk upstairs.

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    March 6

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    This is a great poem - I really like the way that you have expressed your thoughts about the war in this way my favourite part was the haunting ending I think from a constructive criticism point you might like to look at the spelling and everything, just because some people on here don't like that kind of thing - but that is just my opinion and I know that these are lyrics I enjoyed this write!

    Welcome to the site, I hope that you enjoy your time here at AllPoetry!


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  • bry1148
    March 5
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    good

    i like it