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got me?

I’ll do your body good
I’ll turn you every way but loose
My fingers on your satin skin
Will take you to Heaven then back again

got me?
I’ll make you want for more
That’s what this body’s for
Lay back and enjoy the ride
I’m gonna wash over you like a rip tide

got me?
I’m lovin’ every minute of this bliss
I hunger for the taste of your kiss
My tongue slowly traveling where it may
You just sigh, that’s all you have to say

got me?
I tease your neck, your breast your thigh
All I want to do is make you cry
In a good way begging for more
You know that’s what I’m here for

got me?
I linger longer in your heat
Enjoying every moment to repeat
You move against my mouth and tongue
Just like you did when we were young

got me?
I feel your body begin to quake
You’re making mine start to shake
You cry out as you fall
I take what you offer I take it all

got me…
I slowly lay above your fine skin
All I want is to enter in
To this paradise with you
We are one now no longer two

you got me.
Laying with you in the night
In my arms I hold you tight
I kiss and caress your delicate skin
waiting until we can do this again

got me?
I’ll do a body good
Just like you knew I would
The smile on your face says it true
The grin on mine shows you got me and I got you

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  • individuality gold member
    March 25

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    but we are in the middle of the supermarket calm down, wait until we at least get to the checkout


    • Jaded Lily gold member
      March 25
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      oooohhhh can i take a turn at riding the belt at the checkout this time?


  • The Drifter
    March 11
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    A sweet poem of love-0Wonderfully written.
    You have a beautiful page.

    • Jaded Lily gold member
      March 11
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      Drifter, thank you so much for your kind words! I'm so glad you enjoyed this piece as well as my page. Thanks for the read and the nice comment.
      Lily ♥

  • This is a great write. I am unable to write poetry like this i do not know why lol but i enjoy reading

    • Jaded Lily gold member
      March 4
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      I'm so glad you enjoyed this piece. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on this. I had a blast writing this one! Lily ♥


  • Rainbow7
    March 4

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    My favorite lines are:

    Lay back and enjoy the tide
    I'm gonna wash over you like a rip tide.

    A very good write


    • Jaded Lily gold member
      March 4
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      thank you for taking the time to read and comment on this piece. I had fun writing it! Lily ♥

  • Love the rhyming and definitely a "turn me on" kind of write. Nice way to turn something that could mean anything into something naughty. Great job. Thank you for entering and good luck!


    • Jaded Lily gold member
      March 4
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      I'm glad you liked this one. I had a blast writing it! Thanks for the comment!!!

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