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Just One Touch

Your brown eyes were so paralyzing,
stopped dead in my tracks by you.
Whispering words so tantalizing,
irresistable, was all I knew.

Hearts melted with each loving word,
threw caution to the wind that night.
Passionate fantasy, sighing heard,
quivering with delicious delight.

Lost inibitions, no pretenses,
opening up to new found treasures.
Velvet touches arouse the senses,
submit to one anothers pleasures.

Love knew no limits between us two,
both searching for the ultimate peak.
You pleasing me and me pleasings you 
leaving us satisfied and weak.


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  • Aw, yes, a poem that quite clearly defines the irrersistable power of love that makes fools so easily of the wisest of us. Happy St. Paddy's Day to a great illustrator and poet!


    • Sandygram
      March 7
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      Good Morning Wes

      Your comments are always such a pleasure tio read. Thank you for stopping by. Have a wonderful weekend. Take care. Hugs, Sandy


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    March 4

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    quivering with delicious I like that line and 2 before it, Wonderful flow of words and excellent detail. A pleasure to read.


    • Sandygram
      March 7
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      Good Morning

      Thank you for stopping by and reading. You take care, Sandy


  • LittleMoon silver member
    March 4

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    Wow, I would love to have a night like that just once. Can it really be like that or is it just in songs and poetry? I don't think I will find out now. My own fault, wrong choices. Sheila

    • Sandygram
      March 7
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      Good Morning Shelia

      Thank you for the lovely cmoment my friend. Always nice to have you stop by and read. Take care. Hugs and Smiles.

      Blessings, Sandy

  • SoulWhispher
    March 4

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    Well done, both romantic and so sensual without the need to use erotic phrases, you weave such magic with your poetry, blessing and love John

    • Sandygram
      March 7
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      Good Morning John

      How is my dear friend. Thank you for this lovely comment and I am glad you enjoyed reading it. Hugs and Smiles across the miles. Love and Blessings to fill your day.

      Peace and Grace, Sandy
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  • Maxboy gold member
    March 4

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    Very romantic and sensual, well done.

    Wonderful


    • Sandygram
      March 7

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      Good Morning

      Thank you for stopping by and reading. Hope you have a wonderful weekend. Hugs and Smiles.

      Sandy

  • mcheadle
    March 4
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    A page full of beauty and romance

    Soft music and a warm afternoon come and sit while we dinish this dream...mac


    • Sandygram
      March 7
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      Hello Mac

      Thank you for the lovely comment dear friend. Hugs to you. You take care,

      Blesings, Sandy


  • Rovingone gold member
    March 4

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    And that's the way our love begins. With just a touch, our love has grown and now it's meant for you alone. What a delicious rhyme. It makes you remember all sorts of fantasy tales and songs of the sixties.

    • Sandygram
      March 7
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      Good Morning Ed

      Always a pleasure to have to stop by and read. Thank you for both. Hope you enjoy the weekend. Hugs to you my friend. Take care, Sandy

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