Shining crimson drops,
Each with its own story,
The true essence of love,
Of pain,
Of life,
Beauty,
In its rarest forms,
The sign of ultimate sacrifice,
Ultimate pain,
And true love,
To bleed for another,
Is to give everything,
For those scarlet pieces,
Are the essence of life......
A contest entry
- x She's Just a Delicate DisasteR x by xxRainbowDawnxx.
750 points, ended March 6, 2009, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
option 02. Bleed
Comments
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Such sad things can happen and bring us to such states where we wish never to be alive anymore. There is something beautiful about pain, sometimes.
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Wow, this is just beautiful. I really like this one. Awe it's wow it's amazing. I just like this one a lot. It's very sweet and touching. ^_^ such a lovely picture I have capture in my mind. Such powerful emotion and yes it's true it is essence of life. My favorite part would have to be
" To bleed for another,
Is to give everything,
For those scarlet pieces,
Are the essence of life...... "
Good luck in the contest I hope you do well
and thanks for showing me this and I just love this ^_^ nicely penned it
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