Small ship
glides on sky-blue tide
toward known destiny.
Souls meet midway,
where dolphin sings its song
of longing;
where aquamarine
colors yearning.
Where memories
blot the cornflowers
of his eyes;
brush
the canopy
of love's heavenly harbor.
Author notes
Forever sea and sky bring memories of eyes.
Photo: Myra, February 25, 2009 -- Wilderness Blue, South Africa
In a list
A contest entry
- About Something Blue by Kiddy.
450 points, ended March 14, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Soft and sweet. A shared dream. Lovely.
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This is very neat and creative. The title attracted me a lot. You have done a great job with just few lines/words.
How blue it was – 9.2/10 (sky-blue tides, small ship, dolphins’ song, cornflowers, canopy of love – WOW nice choices! )
Diction – 9/10 (short lines, simple language, brilliant images – I loved it)
Theme – 9.5/10 (Very good)
Presentation – 9/10 (Nothing more to comment about it)
Creativity – 9.5/10 (you are very very creative, no doubt 
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Total – 46.2/50
WOW…Lovely score! All the best in the contest!!
Love and regards
Kiddy
(Dr.Vee – Silent Judge) -
The coast I live near never looks like this! The beauty of your words transcends the ocean that separates us. Good luck in the contest.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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beautiful and bright. blue is like serenity. your imagery and words are flawless.
love it.
blessings *stmps
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sublime blueness
This is beautiful, so many shades blooming in my mind's eye. The question of where is the "known destiny" is answered by the end. Lovely.
May I adorn my computer with your photograph?
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Margaret!
You may SEE this with your very own eyes in only a few weeks from now! Do you know that?
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I will fill my eyes with beauty.
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Please do!
I am privileged to see such every day in this region -- take it, Beloved Friend -- it is yours.
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