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Tranquility’s Home

Missing image
Leaping past, waters surface
Lake Trout escapes…
Snapping Turtles jaws, once more.

Ripples form, cascading towards the beach
disturbing this pristeen mirror,
natures still life reflection.

Sunrise now glistens
sparkling in the ripples,
racing past the stilts
beneath crannog where I lie.

I stir, in this difusion
of mornings first light.

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Prompt: Crannog

An ancient Irish or Scottish lake dwelling

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    March 11

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    Wonderfully penned. I love the imagery and thoughts in this. Very well done indeed.
    Thanks so much for your entry.
    Gaylene


  • Rovingone gold member
    March 4

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    Ah, so that is what a crannog is. You made a wonderful tale up in this poem and I could see it all spreading out before me.