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Dream~ Senryu

Missing image

captured in my dream
like a cricket in a cage
trapped in my own heart

Author notes

the picture is of Cupid and Psyche

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  • Mistress Leala silver member
    March 5
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    Well written and deeply felt. Picture flowed nicely with your words.


  • HaleyMary
    March 4

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    Beautiful write and wonderful take on the prompt. I liked the second line the best. Seemed metaphorical, made me think of a person wanting to love another, but something is like holding them back. Thanks for sharing and keep that pen flowing.

    Haley Mary