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el...Sam

The grass is always greener

in the other pastures, mow all

you want, I left the gate open

when I left...

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  • Beret55 silver member
    March 15
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    I guess he got that. A lot said in such few words.
    Very good..

  • Well described momments of the life bringing the universal truth around the words opening the new dimentions of the life..well done..

  • Great, he can find his way home.
    a smile to enjoy the sceney after fresh mowing.


  • Flowergirl
    March 6
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    very nice i love it keep up the great work and i love the way it flows keep it up...

  • Papagallo
    March 6

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    Hmm. Is this like a hit the road Jack statement. Or don't let the gate hit you on the way out. I liked it lots. It made me laugh, even from a man's point of view.

  • Wow. Very well done. You used very few words and a wonderful metaphor to say exactly what you needed to.

    Great job.

    Mike


  • dutch2lips gold member
    March 4
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    awesome write


  • LittleMoon silver member
    March 4

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    To say that much in so few words I find brilliant. Very cleverly done for the prompt. Sheila

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