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Oral Pleasure

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Panties soaked from your heated urge

slowly dripping down your thighs

 

I lie in position waiting to capture every drop

upon my long and thirsty tongue

 

I lick your moistened lips

as I sink my tongue deep inside of you

 

you start to cringe and tremble

as I thrust it in and out

 

you squeeze your voluptuous breasts

pinch on your hardened nipples

 

then slowly bring each one

up to your salivating mouth

 

you stretch your tongue

as far down as it will go

 

lick your nipples and moan

as I touch that sweet and sensitive spot

 

you start to gyrate on my tongue

as I stick my finger up your ass

 

I pick you up and enter your mound

just in time to feel your warmth

 

as it rains down upon my cock

I kiss you passionately

 

as you push my back up against the wall

you slowly fall to your knees

 

looking into my eyes

you start to return the favor

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Just for you!
Happy Anniversary hon!

Background by: Hotchocolate



Permission for Prewrite granted by PassionsPromise
) Sensual/romance/erotic pieces, heat me up and turn me on. Not many can do that, so if you can go for it. I love writing in the genre and love to see how others pen it. If I dont like I sure will let you know it. IF YOU DO THIS ONE PLEASE LABEL CORRECTLY OR AUTOMATIC DQ

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  • This was amazing piece. See she enjoyed it as much as I did.

    Keep it up

    Lovely work

    Good luck
    Passions

  • wowerz this is very good i enjoyed this hon good luck to you in the contest


  • Dragonbabyx3
    March 13
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    I cant comment on this entry... I just cant. Not till I take a very cold shower... scratch that, SEVERAL cold showers.....I have read this about a million times now, and each time, I arrive at the same conclusion... Jeremy, This is your best work yet! I am stunned! Everything went together perfectly! Goddddd this is hot as hell!


  • hotchocolate gold member
    March 4

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    Hee Hee!!! I love this and I'm sure she will to!!! Great job and good luck hon

    • Dragonbabyx3
      March 13
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      Jeremy told me you made the background just for his poem 'Oral Pleasure' and I have to say, it fit very very well with the poem! It was sexy erotic and ooooo I need another cold shower! Wonderful you did on this! Thankyou!

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